2024年高考英语|读后续写——人与动物和谐篇

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Dog Who Saved Our Family We met Max at the pickup area of Alaska Airlines five years ago. He was a standard poodle(狮子狗)born on Valentine’s Day in 2017,and came to us in a small blue box. We had adopted him from an out-of-state raiser who posted the news on the social network. Our only request was that he have a calm behavior, able to bear the pushing and hugging of our eight-year-old daughter and six-year-old son. We were a sweet little family: me, my husband, and our children, Sophie and Jake. But for years I’d felt as if we wouldn’t really be complete until we had a dog. Also, my husband worked in a business company and had to travel some 200 days a year for his job, and I knew I’d feel safer with a large animal sleeping by the door. When we opened the box, the last piece of our puzzle fell into place. With his black hair and intelligent eyes, Max was beautiful. He was so small that he fit into the palm of my hand, his big paws lapping over the sides. He was also a little bit scared. As I pulled him close, I felt his heart pound and wondered if we’d done the right thing, taking him from his mother. But it was too late. Sophie and Jake were already fighting over who would hold him next and who should have the right to take a bath for him. Over the following months, we spent endless hours watching Max play with his Kong toy or roll around the living room floor. Like most poodles, he was smart. He mastered house-training quickly and never chewed on our furniture or shoes. He considered himself one of us. 注意1. 续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One night we were sleeping in the bedroom when I heard some strange noise.________________________________________At that time,Max ran towards me.________________________________________ 解 析 本篇文章以人物为线索,讲述作者收养了一只名叫Max的狮子狗,这只狗第一天来到作者的家庭,就深受作者和孩子们的喜爱。它不仅带来了欢乐,还救了他们一家人。 1. 段落续写:(1)第一段首句 “一天晚上,我们正在卧室睡觉时,我听到一些奇怪的声音。” 本段可以描写Max想尽力发出一些动静来引起作者和家人的注意,作者刚开始不以为然,后来听到了声音越来越大,只好去看个究竟。(2)第二段首句 “正在那时,马克斯向我跑来。” 本段可以描写Max拽着我并示意我去厨房,在Max的指引下,我发现原来是厨房冒烟要着火了。Max的及时帮助,拯救了我们一家人。我对Max的救命之恩和感激之情无法用言语来表达。 2.续写线索:想收养一只狗——Max的到来——喜爱上Max——Max成为家中的一员——听到Max发出异常动静——去查看——发现火灾——救了作者一家。 高 分 作 文 One night we were sleeping in the bed room when I heard some strange noise. I had thought Max was running and scratching the ground, so I paid no attention to it and tried to sleep again. However, the noise became louder and louder, which made me unable to fall asleep.(非限制性定语从句) I had no choice but to have a look. I opened the door and found Max was running around the living room. Upon seeing me, it let out a strange noise. These abnormal behaviors caught my attention and it made me feel a sense of fear as well. At that time, Max ran towards me.It wagged its tail and ran toward the kitchen. (并列关系的先后动作)As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened. I dashed into my children’s room without hesitation, waking them up and rushing out of the house together.(现在分词做状语)At the same time, I called 911 and asked our neighbors for help. Fortunately, due to Max's timely help, both my family and my house were saved. Words couldn't express my gratitude to Max and it was the savior of our family.
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