题目:
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【参考范文】
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
语篇解读
主旨概要
根据提供的关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的三幅图片,撰写一篇题目为“中国交通发展”的发言稿。
核心价值取向
立足中国科技发展,培养学生创新意识和科学精神,彰显时代发展,强化现代化人才建设,实现人才强国,引导学生关注我国经济社会的发展变化,增强国家富强、民族复兴的自豪感和自信心。
语言知识
看图写话方法
独图或漫画类图画作文常用由以下三部分构成:
●简述图片。针对图片写一至两个句子,也就是我们口试中常用的就事论事进行看图说话而已。如:
As can be seen in the picture…
The picture tells us…
●发表感想。就幅图片或整体主题发表自己的一些看法。如:
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. In the first place…In the second place…
●简短结论。最后用一至两个简短句子进行小结,起到“画龙点睛”的作用。如:
As far as I am concerned/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. On the one hand…On the other hand…Only in this way can we solve the problem of…
写作模板
As can be seen in the picture, _________(图画内容). The picture tells us_____________(概括图片大意).
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, _____________(揭示涵义/原因/结果1). Second, _____________(揭示涵义/原因/结果2).
In my opinion/ As for me, we should take some measures to deal with the problem. First, we should_____________(具体措施1). Second, we must_____________(具体措施2). Only in this way can we solve the problem of _____________(图画内容).
简述图片,发表感想,简短结论,各个部分既要有自己独立的内容,又要浑然一体,结合起来表达一个完整的主题。即“开头——发展——结局”或“概括——分析——结论”。
【技能方法】
独图看图写话应从以下几方面着手:
第一步、描述漫画内容
描述漫画内容的基本条件是看懂漫画。要求是:审图要准,定位要清;描述时言简意赅,不可越位;要注意:不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意!因为独图开放作文不看重你的思想厚度,而看重你的语言质量。
第二步、阐述对漫画的理解
所谓对漫画的理解,是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的解释和自己的看法、感想或人生感悟等。要求是:逻辑清晰,合情合理。
根据以上两个步骤,我们可以这样认为:“独图开放作文”只要求你做两件事情,一件是描述图画(describe the following picture),另一件是阐述你对图画解释和看法(explain how you understand it)。相应地,你只需要写两个段落,一段是“描述段”,另一段是“议论段”。
1.“描述段”的写法:第一句可以使用如下句式:In the picture, there is……等。“描述段”的功能就是传达图画中的信息,向读者交代图画内容,所以必能使用“there be”句型。另外,“描述段”的另一个功用即:为第二段的议论埋下伏笔。
2.“议论段”的写法:“议论”段的首句有个固定的句式,即:In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well.等。如何发议论呢?所谓议论,就是根据图画信息,表达你的看法、感想。考生不必过深地挖掘图画信息,只需用简单的英文,表达平易的道理。换句话说,只要你能用正确的英文表达你的感想,便赢得了胜利。